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Sunlight Trapped in Plastic by ~distortedcharm:icondistortedcharm:



I have never felt so trapped in my own sunlight,
As it bounces and reflects in your eyes.
If this were just one night,
It might be easier to pass by.
A final kiss,
A glance your way.
Gone.

But like this,
The days drag by,
Scraping their heels against the carpet.
Friction.
I wish it were fiction—
That we could stay,
Without obstacles flying from every direction.

Verify your love to me,
I think the sell by date has expired on your heart.
Now, we have lost the art of
Being together,
Condensed our feelings to fit this plastic cup.
So what to do now?
Throw it all away?
Or just walk and don’t look back,
Hoping the other does, knowing
We can never return to this place again.
©2007-2009 ~distortedcharm
:icondistortedcharm:

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:iconlanzallamas:
Bitchin' :clap:

Writing more or just posting older material?
:icondistortedcharm:
Writing more but I think this is a bit like how I used to write.

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:iconlanzallamas:
Is that a good thing?
:icondistortedcharm:
Not sure really. It's fairly good that I can even manage to write again!

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:iconlanzallamas:
ah come off it! "can even manage to write again"?!

You know damn well you're capable of writing!

I might be a poetry simpleton.. a literature fiend.. a member of the passive audience.. but I think you're latest writings are pretty damn good
:iconlanzallamas:
**Your

Also a grammar fiend
:iconbodom-angel:
i think this is your best,in my opinion :)
:iconmiserylavey:
Your writing makes me want to (I know it's gonna sound lame, but I just have write it :) ) - to upgrade my english so I could....possibly, one final day write a little bit more you this. Awesome poems, and this one is one of my favs of yours.

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there's a story there to frighten you... [link] :chainsaw:
..but you're gonna love it. :nod: ..hopefully. :fork:

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